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Have you ever loved someone... so much... that they drove you absolutely crazy?

Crazy love...

Like you want to know... everything they are doing... at this very moment... but you're scared of what you might discover... even though... they only wish you truly knew... because all they really want.. Is for you to understand... how much they miss you...

But you feel like you're involved... in a battle between... your heart and soul... to let go... and hold on... because you can't go on like this... but you can't walk away..

Have you ever... been driving along... and all you can do... is just pull over... stop... put your car in park... brush your hair back... take in a deep breath.. Close your eyes...

And dance... side to side... back and forth... with the one... that knows all the words... to your favorite song... the one... that knows your dearest secrets... understands why you laugh.. When it's not that funny... why you cry... when you're not really sad... and why you yell and scream... when everything seems so right...

It's a fatal human flaw...

Why do we treat the ones we love... as if we don't want them in our lives... it's too easy to just put everything down.. And walk away... everyone is replaceable...

Or is this... just what society wants us to believe? Are we so consumed with breakups... flings... one night stands... that we think that commitment is just an illusion? Is the idea of two people... joining together... uniting... and never walking away... really attainable? Or is it just a grand facade... a game that we play...

When a relationship isn't working... when you truly love someone... and you really want to make it work... is it really possible... to "get happy"? Is it worth the effort... the pain... strife... the agony... the "pain period"?

When you really... truly... deeply... love someone... and you... don't ever... want to let them go... it doesn't really matter... whether it will work... it doesn't really matter.. Whether it will last...

What really matters... is the way you make each other feel... when you're apart... you feel like a piece of your heart... has been torn from your chest... when she cries... you can't help but feel sad.. And when she tells you, "I love you"... you can't help but know... that...

This is not crazy love... this is soul mate love.

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Sorry dazed and confused, your poem is full of emotions and expressions of soul platonic love, but it doesn't sounds as poem

at all. It looks more like an essay

But I like your way of expressions of love , a true soul mate love.... Keep on writing

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yea its alright ill buy it

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sucks

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i like it...

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I think its well versed and full of meaning!

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i think ur a crazy stocker person yea thats wat this poem sounds like

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it grabbed my heart...thats for sure...just like the man i love. :(

we're not together :(

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why would you waste your time doiing this. i didnt even read it cause i know its ****. pure ****.

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i like alot

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Thats good.

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i like it i can feel you

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I loooove it! =]

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it's ok but i've read better

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I really liked your poem. I felt all that you were saying.

Excellent!

Keep up the good work.

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I love the ending line.

Its well cute!

Its kinda long but its got a lot of true points in it, so that doesn't really matter.

Its pretty good though.

Well done!

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its nice i like it

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i think its really nice

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wow! thats really good!

:D

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Hooray! Excellent sentence and grammar structure, something seldom seen here on YahooAnswers. It seems to read more like an essay than a poem, but I LOVE it anyway. Keep them coming...

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Love your poem, more prose really. Yes, true love, where 2 r 1 bonded with love and loyalty. Is this girl Filipino by any chance. Your words ring some bells. Nice work though. keep filling up the blank page and keep rocking in the free world.

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oh my that was so from the heart.

it brought tears to my eyes

its wonderful

thank you for sharing such beautiful words

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simple it is called human emotions ,taking the good with the bad whats wrong with that please stay out of the dark place life is to short your intelligence is amazing keep writing

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its good keep it up

and rhyme more

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NO NO NO... your first hunch was correct! It's not soul-mate Love. It IS crazy love. My hair stands up when I read this and I hear the Twighlight Zone themesong in my head.

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It dont even rhime. It really sucks.

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yes it's great i like it very much

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ya i like the poem . would have liked to have given it to a girl I once went with. I felt that way about her however she went with someone else. If you lose her I hope you let her go because it will kill you if you don't